Thursday, January 28, 2010

paper face

I think this poem has very good reference towards us that connects to ourselves. We sometimes look at ourself in the mirror and wants to cover up or change some parts that gets complex in you, therefore it's saying that something useless can be your rescuee for somewhat.
In the poem, it uses paperbag to make the author's face new and put another layer on to his face, because he's expressing which he wants to make his head and draw them.

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Reflection of the slam poem

I think my slam poem is giving off so much personality of mine, because it's structured in a way that i'm just talking to the other guys(bugs) as a imagery, and the verbs used are very stressed which gives lots of impression from the poem.

Slam poems can be different from person to the others in a way that how their personalities are and what is their subject in the poem, which basically means main theme, makes the slam poems feel different to the readers.

Slam Poem

Hate Bugs

By Jin Lee

Honestly!

I hate you THING, you disgusts me for no reason,

I just feel as though still one of you are flowing around my body even now.

What are you born to? To work? To study?

You just live to be despised by us all!

What do you acquire from being around us?

It will be just a whole lot of spray all over you,

that slowly suffocates you.

I advice you that even my cat hatred you!

If he glimpse your midget feathery legs,

He will hounds you down and gulp down through his throat.

You have no suspicion how much I disgust you,

Because if you want to know a modest,

Then I have slaughtered almost more than hundreds of thousands of your dear friends.

And I believe that most of them are work of my cute little cat!

I can bet that next one to be disparage by us,

It’s going to be you certainly!

I was scared of you mostly,

more than hating you.

I think you are better off not being here

Because I don’t know what an odd thing will happen in your dumpy miserable time.